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Driftwood faces

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The white picket fence

You sat on for endless days,

has washed up from nowhere.

 

A driftwood spinal cord

unfolds from a deflective surface,

vacant of ripples, devoid of vibration.

 

Neutrality tips no scales

scattering your unspoken faces,

into muddied shallow waters.

 

With no depths to discover

boldly offering emptiness.

Fools gold wrapped in a muslin cloth.

 

Checking into dissolute terminals,

flying off to a honeycomb horizon,

carrying effervescent cargo.

◄ The edges of sadness

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Andy N

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 08:20

nice structure and balance throughout the piece, rach... love the first stanza and carrying effervescent cargo in particular.. top one x

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