Driftwood faces
The white picket fence
You sat on for endless days,
has washed up from nowhere.
A driftwood spinal cord
unfolds from a deflective surface,
vacant of ripples, devoid of vibration.
Neutrality tips no scales
scattering your unspoken faces,
into muddied shallow waters.
With no depths to discover
boldly offering emptiness.
Fools gold wrapped in a muslin cloth.
Checking into dissolute terminals,
flying off to a honeycomb horizon,
carrying effervescent cargo.
Andy N
Wed 23rd Mar 2011 08:20
nice structure and balance throughout the piece, rach... love the first stanza and carrying effervescent cargo in particular.. top one x