Carnivore
A vegetable in Borneo
runs a guest house
by a tree.
The furry bat
reclines in that
fine veggie's pitcher
green.
Between dreaming
in this fine repose
he does some poo and pee.
His kindly host
has justly earned
this very special fee.
Steve Regan
Tue 5th Apr 2011 12:16
Some anthropomorphic allusion in this Malpoet, which is surprising from you. It works very well though.
In fact I would call this poem "charming" if the word hadn't been hijacked by middle class tossers. You hear it all the time on Radio 4, and it has been known to crop up in poetry workshops.
Back, back foul didact, dare ye not to attempt the slaying of my creative soul!