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The first sight of red and black
shiny jewel upon leaf and blade.
First buds that promise pastures greener,
an unthreatening breeze that blows gentler.
Coats are lighter colours brighter,
abrasive breaths no longer shocking,
replaced with a pleasant cleansing inhalation.
A heightened sense of promise is delivered,
as birdsong no longer dulled by winter elements,
rides on airwaves to earshot through open windows.
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lovely piece, rachael.. particularly like '
Coats are lighter colours brighter,
abrasive breaths no longer shocking'
but i like all of it as it has tons of lovely images.
glad you liked my 'spring is here' piece too and commented.. x
Aww Rachael, I saw lots of Ladybirds today, they really do usher in the spring don't they. Uplifting poem x:)
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Lynn Dye
Thu 7th Apr 2011 12:54
Enjoyed this poem, Rachael, just love the spring! xx