Sonnet III
This was written after a trip to Marakesh, ok so I've used orange, I know!
Once seared by heat marrow changes form,
Air so arid, dry, tasting like school chalk
Epiphanies evoked through eyes of scorn
Can't comprehend these aren't Lancashire folk
New cultural laws, awareness I lack
Minaret dominates a seething mass square
Women in black robes tongues making a clack
Facinated by his gold flaxen hair
Souuks smelling of fresh patchouli and orange
Disorient both mins, soul and senses
Camel leather on stalls haphazard, arranged
Pungent tangs breakdown English defences.
Both cultures misjudged by lack of language
Return to the desert without anguish.
Jeff Dawson
Mon 14th Jul 2008 15:48
Hi Louise, yes it's a different world! I've been to Tangier and nearly went to Marrakesh (its a long story!), so i know what you mean. You've really given the reader a good picture of the culture of the country and the difference in what we're used to! Enjoyed it, thanks Jeff