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Deep rooted

Craven, i kneel at your feet,
crystal eyes implore you,
pathetic and needy.
Frigid disdain matches my gaze,
self disgust turns my eye to the ground
as you sneer with approval at my shame.
Satisfied with my agony and excited by control,
you play,
taunting

Puppet-master wins again.
 

escape

◄ Amnesia haze

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Andy N

Tue 10th May 2011 08:19

yeah, I agree this is a Escape poem. Would defo tag this into it.

Wasn't expecting the Puppet Master reference originally also but it ties the full thing together lovely.

Top stuff x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 8th May 2011 22:17

A form of psychological 'escapism' for both dominant and submissive.

I think "Escape' would work as a tag.

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Francine

Sun 8th May 2011 07:15

Yes... You can take this two ways.
I prefer to see it as consensual... even though a bit twisted.

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Alan Morrison

Sat 7th May 2011 10:47

A gem. A multi-faceted tiny gem.

I hope this isn't really happening to you. It is a common enough scenario. (And the awfullest part of all is that the kneeler can be addicted to the kneeling in a kindof crazy reciprocity of mutual parasitism, which makes it very difficult to debrief).

"as you sneer with approval at my shame". Genius line. Total genius.

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