Sunset
Drowning in a sea of tragedy,
engulfed by relentless waves of
heartache and despair,
I fill my lungs.
Burning deep inside as I am
removed,
loose-limbed and euphoric,
I fall towards the blackness of release.
Numbing cold creeps through
my waning heart, stopping the hurt
and I cry,
tearless and relieved.
The last light of the day is always the prettiest.
Andy N
Fri 20th May 2011 08:08
loved this, Kath.. You may want to think about a split from 'I fall towards the blackness of release' as there seems to me like it could benefit from splitting the stanzas there, but either way - loved it...
hope you are good x