A flatful of dust
My sunlit screen’s all obscured by bright dust
Like blinding snowflakes frozen in mid-fall
The sun moves westwards as it always must
And now I’m finding that I can see all
As shadows mount the white screen and white wall
Goodbye sun, you’re no friend to thought process
You bring too much reality; you crawl
Into each dirty corner, dark recess
Training a spotlight on each filthy mess
Spilt food that’s hardened into yellow crust
In kitchen. Look at the floor in the hall
Such biodiversity. I’m impressed
Victorian-style cleaning maids, please just
Line up outside until you hear me call
<Deleted User> (5646)
Wed 23rd Jul 2008 21:46
The dust i can cope with, just about.
It's the bloody mites that get me, little blighters.
But apart from that, love this sonnet. I can't think of a better word than Sandres, "classy", so i'll just put "very" in front.