Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Note: No profile exists for this entry - most likely it was deleted.

Two wheels good

Not as easy as falling off a bike

Was teaching my girl to ride one today

Her knees and elbows padded, took a hike

To the park where the surface is okay

Firm dirt path shaded by a canopy

Of mature trees from the sun’s wilting heat

She tilted, wobbled, paused for several plays

On nearby swings and seesaw, to the beat

Of workmen on a distant roof. ‘Compete

With those two sisters, show off swing technique!’

She thought, all Machiavellianly,

Then we left them, went riding in the street

Or she did, with me guiding, wide awake

To traffic, parked cars, and health and safety

◄ Two aspects of loneliness

Fairground distraction ►

Comments

darren thomas

Thu 24th Jul 2008 10:13

Are bikes those things you buy, only to leave in a shed for spiders to play on and spin webs in their frames?
Nice one Ant...

<Deleted User> (3509)

Thu 24th Jul 2008 00:27

Hi guys, this reminded me of trying to ride my first bike. Disaster. Fell off and scuffed my wrists. Never since managed even to drive a car. How sad is this. Poetry is so personal. love it. Sandy.

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 23rd Jul 2008 22:30

Machiavellianly. Such a heavenly word yet means nothing of the sort. (if you know what i mean.)
Reminds me of my niece who insisted she did not need stabilizers. She fell off!
Not only that, she refused to even look at the bike again for several weeks.
ps. Hope you bought her a hard hat!
love janet.xx

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message