SOFT FOCUSED SILENCE
The window waved
to a silence:
cloud-shaped
swallowing time
Wanderlust eats stars
Takes abandonment home for tea.
Remembers when The
Golden Girls had
their silver hue.
Knows what to do
when you don't
She can even magic eye,
and fingerknits belonging on the bus.
Bubble gum girl
happily sits still and thinks
cats-cradling her thoughts
and popping.
Extending lifes
slinky-links
Dusty reads
old care-worn books,
looks at interesting people
through disenchanted eyes.
Cries others tears,
counts years in buttons.
Seeks solace in
the days frayed edges
Derek one day spoke
of it all...
gushing a mixer tap of syllables.
Words were swallowed
by Sir's soundproof cloak
the Day Derek finally spoke
On Wednesdays Tom goes out
and keeps it all in
reflectes light
like no one else.
Melts lonelyness
in the palm of his hand.
Hugs friendship in to
isolated bones
Linda inhales her words
through a pink bendy straw.
Towards night time
and against the law-
there are always more
men,
affluent, complicit
more lonely searching souls
to accompany
To solicit
(cant find a direction or end to this..any ideas welcome) :o) thanks .
Cate Greenlees
Sun 19th Jun 2011 20:00
There is some arresting imagery in this Emma, and phrases which linger in the mind like"cats cradling her thoughts."
As to the direction it should go since each stanza is about a different character maybe a final summing up of the whole idea of loneliness and silence would work?
Cate xx