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You fear change.

I fear fate.

Ever variable,

time and space,

emotion and place.

 

The reciprocation of love.

 Elevation.

 

But rejection.

Fear spreads like an infection.

Insecurity insets.

Like insects breeding within.

 

I begin to wonder.

What do I acquire to quench desire?

How to be?

What to say or do to be,

who I am to me

being who I am to you.

 

I  fight to see logic.

Reason.

Female intuition overwhelms and overcomes.

I'm all but done.

 

Then you.

 

Beautiful, careful, gentle you.

Hold me I fall.

Catch me I fall.

Say my name and all I hear

is music to the ear,

passion to the body,

food for my hungry soul.

 

You.

 

Feed me.

Complete me.

You and your humility.

Your ability to fill me.

 

You have all that I am.

Share all that I want.

We can need.

Let me feed your hungry soul.

Ignite passion extinguished, and be.

Us.

 

◄ Born to greatness.

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 6th Jul 2011 07:31

Hi Amy, thanx for comments on my poems, really like your work, some quality writing, particularly like this, it's a wonderful 'love' 'us' poem. lots of well chosen lines, 'let me feed your hungry soul' great stuff! Jeff x

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Dave Bradley

Fri 24th Jun 2011 13:43

Hi Amy, Just discovered your posts, recommended by a friend. Like many on WOL I'm not that systematic about reading blogs. Glad you're with us - your stuff is good. I like this one best.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 22nd Jun 2011 16:18

Wow! Could be expressing exactly what goes through me too, this. Really enjoying your work Amy - you have a definite talent!

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Andy N

Wed 22nd Jun 2011 08:18

enjoyed this, Amy.. Defo want I would like to see performed live (would tangle me in knots trying to perform it however - lol) x

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