carrion
The ravens’ claws keep steady grip
on this castle for their keeping.
Winds whistle through empty squares.
Not even a shard of glass remains to rattle.
Stark on this buttress cliff
the stones look out to sea.
I thought it must have been
the isolation hospital.
Saw in my mind, islanders tucked up
sweating out the fevers and the agues
oblivious of crashing waves.
But I was wrong.
Lower down a jagged quarry crouches.
It never made much money,
but this ill-starred trade was enough
to cause a hospital to be erected.
Now raven’s wait for meat again
perhaps remembering
the heady and dramatic days
when labouring men were carrion.
Elaine Booth
Wed 6th Jul 2011 22:29
You conjured this up so well, Ann - I could smell and feel the wind off the sea. You have a talent for making the reader feel as you did on that certain day and time. The image of the feeding raven begins and ends the poem beautifully, underlining the fraility of man's endeavours while nature carries on unperturbed. X