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Juliet

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She wraps the silk around her limbs;

tight silver tendrils, to touch as peeling lily skins.

The thought of  it would last forever –

over the rip, the fall,

 it would.

 

The pleating whispers, lavender skirt and hush,

 blue dipped fingertips rush.

The hurting,

spinning sphere of youth - 

it would last forever.

 

Folding, rolling,

the two otters blush,

a plait of play, a rippled halo

kiss,

her arching foot, tender, twists -

it would last forever.

 

Holding her in his lift,

declaring the sun,

the gaping years of silhouettes

behind the gift,

of a threaded dance between the lips;

it would last forever.

 

On a bed

where she retires, fourteen,

and memory in those limbs, now seen,

now taut, now older

and watching, sidelined, keen -

a stage so,

she had thought things beautiful,

would last forever.

◄ Pilgrim

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Andy N

Thu 7th Jul 2011 08:16

really enjoyed the full piece, chuck but the first stanza particularly stuck in my head x

Philipos

Wed 6th Jul 2011 20:13

Loved the metaphors - loved the poem - so well crafted. An altogether delightful piece.

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