Comments
Philipos
Thu 14th Jul 2011 22:50
Grabs the reader's attention immediately with 'The flaxen flickers, shadow boxing'
Penultimate stanza was my fav but the whole thing is so atmospheric. Agree entirely with Laura and Francine's comments. A lovely poem.
Oooo I love this too! Poe was a favourite of mine as a kid...I blame him for my long-standing fear of being buried alive! This is so rich with that sort of fear - brilliant!
I love this!
The eeriness... a grand imagination, or paranoia.
Third stanza is my favourite.
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Deborah Jordan Bailey
Sat 16th Jul 2011 08:25
I really like this..the images dance on the walls of my mind and the influence of Poe oozes through the gaps between..beautiful and eerie..i could hear Evanescence in my head while i read it too.. lovely, Marianne.x