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The Shrink

Dripping off my tongue

Twisting into smoke, spirals lifting.

Grey and excessive

His face is painted

All over my hoodoo voodoo

All those glass beads

Shattering under my foot, in anger

The feathers hidden on purpose

Intricate patterns devoid

Yet based on flaws

They mean nothing to him

Like they do me

If only he could see

What I see.

Beyond the pampas grass

◄ Little Digmoor

Oh Nectarine! ►

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Andy N

Mon 25th Aug 2008 20:31

The ending works particularly well here I think Sean, but it is another good piece!

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Sat 2nd Aug 2008 19:37

Wonderful Sean

<Deleted User> (5646)

Fri 1st Aug 2008 22:00

Hi Sean, he never will mate. His mind is trained to see only logical reasoning.
Imagination and foresight erased.
Good stuff, i like this one. But i'll bet you don't see the same as me beyond the pampas grass.
Janet.x

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