The Burning Of The Sting
He stood for an hour in silence
And tried to recall
The last time her glance
Had shadowed him.
Flat back in the park
He remembers
The unfurnished blossom
And copperfumes
Of the smelting city.
They were happy then.
Swatting off wasps
In the brazen heat
Of that afternoon.
But a wasp landed quick.
Perched on his elbow
Pierced through to the bone
And she had to leave early
For then and forever.
Her image replaced
By the burning of the sting
And now that sting
Is all he can remember.
Andy N
Mon 11th Jul 2011 08:07
I agree with Micheal here... It's a beauitful poem, Kealan - I think you are on fire at the moment with your stuff... I particularly like the first three stanzas here, but the full piece was excellent.. Keep it up! A