The Volunteer Creature
The perfect colour
Shade grey rising
From a tired hill
In the form of smoke.
Walking for the sake
Of some frail destination
With echoes of graves and lovers
Covering the paces.
Every breath dreaming of relevance
Until a silk of stillness
And strangle of flowers
Beats the path finished.
A feint light forms
The brief, naked image
Of the creature in all of us
That wants to be alive.
Noetic-fret!
Tue 19th Jul 2011 20:07
Aw! The last stanza is a tearjerker.
Brilliant yet again. I am not going to post any more comments for now. Your work has blown me over. And i don't want to seem an obsessive about your work but fekk me Kealan, you got some real talent.
Stay well
Mike
xxx