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silver lady midnight moon

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When silver lady midnight moon

Caresses sand and sea

I can hear her gently calling

A calling out to me

 

She is pushing me and pulling me

And luring me along

For she wants me in the ocean

Where she says, that I belong.

 

She wants me in the ocean

She wants me in the sea

She wants me neath the foaming

Rage so the waters cover me.

 

She lulls me with the rocking waves

And soothes me in the spray

Relaxing in her briny arms

She carries me away.

 

She draws me ever downward

Onto the ocean bed

I hear her softly sing her song

As the darkness fills my head

 I fall into a slumber

So deep I cannot wake

I cease all struggle for the breath

I do not wish take.

 

She whispers kindly to me

As I sink beneath the foam

She is soothing me

And calming me

For she wants to take me home.

 

When the waves are over me

And when I breathe no more

She will gently lift me upward

 And place me on the shore

 

 

,PHOTOGRAPH BY RACHEL BOND

◄ HE STANDS ALONE

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Rachel Bond

Wed 20th Jul 2011 00:34

love your poem mum, i like the way its not sentimental about the nature of the sea. Ive heard that drowning is in fact very painful as your lungs explode with water!! I agree youve caught that beguiling nature.
its fun to think the moon and the sea might have an army of mermen and that they want to claim female souls, probably maxed out on smelly male sailors ;) keep posting.

<Deleted User> (7129)

Tue 19th Jul 2011 16:40

thank you Steve I will look for Ann's piece :)

<Deleted User> (7129)

Tue 19th Jul 2011 09:28

thank you Ann.
The photo is from a series taken by my very talented daughter Rachel who's work I'm sure you know on here.

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 19th Jul 2011 06:42

I've heard it said that drowning is a very peaceful way to go, surprisingly. That, or freezing to death apparently! I enjoyed the poem and the photo.

<Deleted User> (7129)

Mon 18th Jul 2011 22:51

THANKS jOHN
I know it wouldnt hee hee I cant even swim.and Im terrified of water but hey ho :)

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John Coopey

Mon 18th Jul 2011 22:44

Very nice, R.
Not so sure it would be quite as serene as this though!

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