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diamante love

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                                         x

                                       love

                                  hot steamy

                          kissing sucking fucking

                     eyelids mouths fingers tongues

                          pulsing sweating panting

                              dishevelled spent

                                       sleep

                                          z

 

diamante

◄ by your leave

diamante ghost ►

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 10:51

Well that's something I suppose! ;)

C Byrne

Mon 15th Aug 2011 09:50

i like the first and last lines!

<Deleted User> (9591)

Sun 7th Aug 2011 22:08

Stick to rhyming , dear

<Deleted User> (6315)

Fri 29th Jul 2011 15:57

Short but oh so sweet!...love the title and shape too..

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 29th Jul 2011 14:49

Nice and naughty, great idea too! Jeff XZ

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 29th Jul 2011 13:41

Ah, but Graham - it started with a kiss (x)

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 29th Jul 2011 10:00

A little bit racy for my liking Ann, but nice to see you've still got your Mojo working. One change I'd make, I'd change the x to an a. This way it could be the most erotic journey from A to z. Well done!

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Dave Bradley

Fri 29th Jul 2011 09:51

What a pity Izz is on holiday, she'd have enjoyed this one. Excellent.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 29th Jul 2011 09:30

Ann! slow pussy inDEED - I am shocked and PERTURBED madam!

hehehe :D

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Andy N

Fri 29th Jul 2011 08:12

made me smile... x

<Deleted User> (7212)

Thu 28th Jul 2011 22:56

I've said it before, I'll say it again - you're one horny bint :)
well done

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 28th Jul 2011 18:45

I could say I'm more of a slow pussy - but I won't!

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Jul 2011 18:17

Foxy! You fastcat!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 28th Jul 2011 18:01

Terrific!

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Laura Taylor

Thu 28th Jul 2011 14:12

Hahaa! You must have put this up while I was typing on your profile!

Blimey *fans self*

This blows mine out the water! :D Nice one!

That's really clever using the x and z as nouns too

Brilliant :D

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 28th Jul 2011 14:10

Don't know how I came up with this one! Pardonnez moi!

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