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Wings Above Me

Dark days had filled my life
once upon a time,
and since the night,
where I lit the flame
and released all dreams
screaming inside my heart
to live and breathe,
those dark days
are finally
no more.
Now, light has spilled out
into my life,
and sometimes,
I waver between standing alone
and stepping into the unknown.
There were times
when I had almost
turned the flame into smoke
and watched my dreams hover over nothing,
but then there were those
that took my hands,
showered me with kind words,
and gave me the strength
to embrace the fire
burning so bright
in me these last few years.
My dreams have formed concrete,
and I can see the stage
off in the distance.
I am almost there,
and if I turn back now,
the light will fade.
The curtain will fall,
and I'll be nothing
but a faint whisper
drifting over to you.
And now more have come
with dreams of their own
and hearts bigger than mine
and lent their strength,
their love,
and their hope
of showing the world
what a beautiful soul can dream
to me,
lifting my own wings off this ground.
And I can see the heavens above me,
a sight denied for a very long time,
and as I hope to rise
higher and higher,
I will never forget those
that have taken my hand
and showed me
the way
out of the darkness
and into light.

Wings Above Me (Thank you, everyone here, at triggerstreet, and Harekrushna Mahanta)

By, Melissa R. Mendelson

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Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Mon 18th Aug 2008 22:59

Dear Melissa

This poem has a lot of your inner feelings in your poem. You have gone through memory lane and examined your soul. There are times in life that we need a gentle pat on the back or a hug from someone to show us that they care. It seems that you went over that line too.

"""There were times
when I had almost
turned the flame into smoke
and watched my dreams hover over nothing,
but then there were those
that took my hands,
showered me with kind words,
and gave me the strength
to embrace the fire
burning so bright
in me these last few years."""

This poem has a healing properties dealing with thoughts or things that you had to overcome for whatever the reason...Great write Melissa!!

Thank you for sharing a portion of your heart in your poem. Loved this one!

Warm wishes,
Zuzanna
xx

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 10th Aug 2008 22:52

Hi Melissa, great to hear from you. I love this, it was like reading my own thoughts, I could have wrote it myself, well probably not as good!

I identified with your struggle as you did with mine in my sentiments in the 'Just Believe' poem I wrote in April, beautifully written, love hope and strength, says it all best wishes Jeff X

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sun 10th Aug 2008 20:19

Hi Melissa, this is truly lovely.
Never give up the fight, and
you'll always see the light.

Love and peace. Janet.x

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