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Leopard print is common. And gets the job done. The sophisticated one hurts. I have grown to appreciate the pain. It is more private And less crude Than the childish ones. In those I feel deceptive. Restricting my disobedient affairs I face the world.

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Ray Miller

Mon 8th Aug 2011 15:41

You mean the poem is unfinished? It's not so bad as it is - the last line is a killer. Good luck with it.You might consider an alternative to "appreciate", summat like cherish.

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