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The Aftermath

 

These young rioters have no shame!

Didn’t do that in our day!

Let’s cut all their benefits,

Let’s make them all pay!

 

But once they have no money,

How then will they pay?

They’d only loot and pillage,

There’d be no other way.

 

We all feel sorry for the shopkeepers,

None of it’s their fault.

But to deal with these nasty thugs,

Common sense needs to be sought.

 

Some say it’s the parents, they’re too soft,

Or else they just don’t care.

Others blame the economy,

There’s a bigger picture out there.

 

No jobs and no prospects for the young

Can not be a healthy state,

But to be brought up with no respect

Just leads to unbridled hate.

 

Many a debate’s been argued.

Which is really true?

But am I the only one to think?

It’s a combination of the two!

 

Not that this excuses them,

There is really no excuse.

I'd send them to fight in Afghanistan

But I'm afraid they'd be no use!

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Comments

<Deleted User> (9641)

Fri 26th Aug 2011 22:03

That was very well thought of and written... well done you..

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Lynn Dye

Wed 17th Aug 2011 19:41

Thank you for kind words, Francine.

I've just added another verse on the end...

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Francine

Wed 17th Aug 2011 00:12

I like the way you've rhymed this and made statements of truth.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:30


no thats fine by me Lynn
you pose a fair and sensible question.

ta chuck.

Stef.xx

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Lynn Dye

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:27

Thanks for comments, Stef, you are so right about the real victims. I do not mean to excuse the rioters at all. Ta, Lynn xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:23


guess who again!

just to say
on the other hand
many of the rioters
would not change places with
a third world person who has to walk
thirty miles or more for water
and in most cases carrying a child as well

we should never forget those-real-victims.

thanks again Lynn-take care-Stef.xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:15


ohhh too right Lynn.

the fat cats,
white collar criminals

those hardfaced B*****d,s
have a lot to answer for.

why dont they bring
them before the courts.
and not just one scapegoat either!

why because they close ranks too well!

grrrrr!

thanks girlie.

Stef.xx

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