Waiting For A Star To Fall
Star
Diamonds strewn across black velvet sky
Starfish scattered along the shore
Star shaped maple leaves flutter and fly
Star flakes of snow in the winter's roar
I miss you so much wherever you are
All I ever wanted was to be your
Star
Photography by Lisa Milligan
Isobel
Tue 16th Aug 2011 16:13
I've never been able to write in a stream of consciousness so I envy you that ability.
This is a light delicate piece Lisa and works well as a short poem. I like Ray's idea of going from general to specific/individual. It makes for a sad, whistful ending. x