Ashes Blow Over All Things
Oh, Thom, such a deeply sad poem. The lilting of the line "I let the ashes blow" works well. What interests me also though is the fact that the protagonist is the one who controls what's going on here. They are the one who lets the ashes blow and the words scorch all things. A lot of levels to this poem. I liked it a lot.
<Deleted User> (8943)
Wed 17th Aug 2011 09:57
So much pain here Thom. The lines about searching for meaning and the "burning words... scorch all things" resonate strongly with me.
Powerful piece.
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<Deleted User> (8730)
Sat 20th Aug 2011 11:07
very romantic and meaningful. I could read that one again....