Mourning Dawns
A mourning dawns like a black sun,
Slipping like a shadow through the heavens.
Unseen, it is not caught by the sky and
In three days it will touch the earth once more.
Below a woman facing west waits.
For the second time her waters have broken, for
She has cried her heart dry, but it has not cracked.
Her hope will be the beacon that brings him back.
Above a father stands staring south.
As the sun crosses the sky, he does not stop it,
But lets the warmth leave him. For he knows that people
Are re-born when stars guide them through the night,
So no crying he makes at the dying of the light.
Scott Devon
Wed 17th Aug 2011 18:40
Hello Philipos,
thank you for your comments. The last line is a deliberate hybrid composed of a Dylan Thomas quote and a reference to the Christian line which goes, 'and the little Lord Jesus no crying he makes'. I am attempting to draw a link between the birth of Christ and his death, because he is about to re 're-born' by overcoming death. That is why the last line reads that way.