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I walked the scarred streets today.

Walked down the middle along the white broken spine line.

Did you see it?

Did you see the spider-web glass where the blow was caught?

Did you hear the PM use his windpipe to beat the streets?

Did you see the watchers faces, tight skin stretched like drums?

Did you see it?

 

Everyone speaks when no-one knows it seems,

For this madness came upon us silent like blood.

Suddenly it was just there sparking the streets.

Smoke signalling, remember me, remember me.

Scribbling on the sky, we are not dead.

But then the rains came, and the madness bled out

Stopped kicking and went still.

And from behind our stereotype shields we all offered our thoughts.

 

Yet, still I wonder about those who went to war

I wonder if they’ll say, I was one of those who fought on Crispin’s Day.

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Isobel

Tue 16th Aug 2011 14:47

I enjoyed this Scott - a very abstract non emotive approach to what happened - which is what you were after. Your writing is very powerful.

You give the atmosphere of a post science fiction type apocalypse. Let's just hope these events don't keep re-occurring...

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Laura Taylor

Tue 16th Aug 2011 10:23

Love the line about beating the streets with a windpipe. Powerful stuff. Love the writing style, very different

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Tue 16th Aug 2011 09:13


brilliantly thought out,

S.W.

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shoeless

Mon 15th Aug 2011 17:53

hello Scott, hope you are keeping well ,I really like this poem.

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Gus Jonsson

Mon 15th Aug 2011 12:04

luv it Scott... great!



....was offered a dozen ex riot Argos Catalogues in the pub last nght, very popular, people were fighting over them...


Hope to C U soon

Gus

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Sun 14th Aug 2011 14:01

Nice one Scott

Scott Devon

Sun 14th Aug 2011 13:37

Hello Thomas,
that's very kind of you. I wanted to wait until I had calmed down before I posted anything. I felt that simply responding in anger to the riots would just make me a verbal rioter.

<Deleted User> (9554)

Sun 14th Aug 2011 13:31

Hi Scott,
you've really caught the mood with this wonderful aftermath poem. Great stuff!

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