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The sweat is running 
Down my arms
It is almost noon
And I have done nothing 
But sit at this desk
I sit at everyday
And drink coffee
Wondering where the girl is
Who sits beside the vending machine
Perhaps she is sick
But I think maybe all
The beautiful people are
Elsewhere on a day like this.
Outside the trees are burning 
And the sun is pushing 
Shadows from the Doric pillars
That are lined in their
Neat manner that suggests a
Midwestern American town
Or Greek Agora
But there is no life here
It is mid July
And we’re all adrift.
I get up and wander through the building
I walk along the gantries
And through the long rooms
Where men of varying ages
Sit reined in by desks
Staring at monitors
Deprived pale looks on their faces.
I begin to imagine
We are aboard a ship
A vast galleon far at sea
And all these men looking
At spreadsheets
Are instead pouring over maps
Plotting our navigation
While others are
Are decoding fragments 
Of  ancient manuscripts,
Deciphering hieroglyphs
And piecing together clues,
Each man unified 
By a collective journey
Exercising their wits
And breaking new ground
Utterly employed, in this 
The dawn of a heroic new age.
 
 
 
 

◄ Brief Poem 08/08/11

Between Christmas & New Year ►

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Tom Harding

Mon 29th Aug 2011 15:42

thanks all!

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 26th Aug 2011 15:49


IF ONLY PEOPLE WERE:
`poring over maps`
`ancient manuscripts`
piecing together clues`
or `unified and collective`

(it would completely ruin the irony of your
`The dawn of a heroic new age`)

Good work!


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Thu 25th Aug 2011 12:22

I think this is splendid...you capture that 'office' feeling so well...lovely disctiptive lines too :)

Outside
the trees are burning
And the sun is pushing
Shadows from the Doric pillars

yup this worked for me :)

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 25th Aug 2011 08:59

If only it were so! Life doesn't seem to get very heroic these days. I like this, interesting and sad too somehow. I don't know if it's good or bad when imagination takes you away from the real mundane world - good I guess. I remember having to do the washing up when I was 7 cos mum and dad had chicken pox (which they got from me.) I pretended all the knives and forks were people and they'd drown if I didn't rescue them from the washing up bowl! It made an adventure of it.

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