Office
IF ONLY PEOPLE WERE:
`poring over maps`
`ancient manuscripts`
piecing together clues`
or `unified and collective`
(it would completely ruin the irony of your
`The dawn of a heroic new age`)
Good work!
<Deleted User> (6315)
Thu 25th Aug 2011 12:22
I think this is splendid...you capture that 'office' feeling so well...lovely disctiptive lines too :)
Outside
the trees are burning
And the sun is pushing
Shadows from the Doric pillars
yup this worked for me :)
If only it were so! Life doesn't seem to get very heroic these days. I like this, interesting and sad too somehow. I don't know if it's good or bad when imagination takes you away from the real mundane world - good I guess. I remember having to do the washing up when I was 7 cos mum and dad had chicken pox (which they got from me.) I pretended all the knives and forks were people and they'd drown if I didn't rescue them from the washing up bowl! It made an adventure of it.
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Tom Harding
Mon 29th Aug 2011 15:42
thanks all!