Between Christmas & New Year
Philipos
Wed 31st Aug 2011 22:35
I liked this being immediately hooked on 'The frost is caught in cob webs' which is one of my favourite scenes. I thought the rest read well also.
Excellent evocation.
it`s only me, but I think it would have been perfect if, `This year of death` would have read `The death of the year`
...Nice poem.
Love the way you've captured this dull no-mans-land period of time. I keep coming back to the phrase about the horses heads - never thought of it that way. I like that, hearing something described in a really new way.
"Long heads reaching outwards
Like something lost at sea."
And the last line, loaded with tension.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Thu 1st Sep 2011 20:54
Excellent poem, worth rereading many times for its beauty of images and atmosphere. I agree that the 'horses' scene is outstanding.