Foundations

Built a cliché house

on overheard sand

 

opened                                    windows                                 wide

 

life blew whistles in

took my breath

for granted

sent a shiver down my

jelly walls

percussive cutlery

spooned                       forked                         carved

thin air

 

home sweet

collapsed

like a pack of

wolves were blowing it

down

huff, puff

i’m so tired

squeal piggies

 

curtains whip

pane-less frames

 

yesterdays pebble

still a lifted sink plug

where

black as the ace of

crude hid

 

where

I blinded

the girl

who gave me the kiss of

spine

 

blinked blank adder milk clouds

then sprinted away

 

 

 

In the cold light of

me

exposed           houseless

like a spare

person on the beach

I

saw home is where

the heart

 

can hear

 

a                                              stretching                                                        shore

 

a                                              horizon                                                            as far

 

as the eye

can think

 

 

made a front door boat

unlocked my sails

from the abyss

of repair

nailed my colours

to the mast

pushed off

to hear it all before

◄ All night gas station

Widdendream ►

Comments

Philipos

Wed 31st Aug 2011 22:29

I agree with Steve - a mind-stretching poem so different from the norm of things and having the head turning this way and that to catch up. 'curtains whip pane-less frames' eh? Clever.

<Deleted User> (6315)

Wed 31st Aug 2011 12:18



Jeeez..kudos for the format..I tried this on here with a write called brown crickets and whoosh almost threw my pc through the window!

Great lines..dunno which I like the best I think maybe Yesterdays pebble.

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