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A Haunted Portrait

A Haunted Portrait
by, Melissa R. Mendelson

I saw the girl
with the feather in her hat
in my darkest hour,
but I was sinking fast.
And nobody was going
to take me home,
and she walked down the hall,
leaving white whispers in the wind.
And nobody would believe a word
that I said.
I was the ghost,
and she was now memory.
I was witness,
and she was gone
with a finger to her lips.
Now, the walls were vacant,
and her portrait was buried
under six feet of dust
in a basement of forgotten thought.
But on this day,
the day I come home,
there she is
back on the wall,
life in perfection
with no such tragedy
to fade to black.

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Comments

<Deleted User> (4235)

Sat 10th Sep 2011 00:21

Thank you, Stef and Patricia. :)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 9th Sep 2011 20:05

a very clever and different take
on a ghostly theme.

enjoyed by

Stef&Patricia.

<Deleted User> (4235)

Fri 9th Sep 2011 00:44

And stranger how we remember such things many years later.

Thank you for reading this. :)

Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:24

Strange how certain things such as pictures trigger after-thoughts. There is much implied in this poem for the reader to pick out and explore which is what the muse is all about. I enjoyed reading this thanks.

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