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Charles Loves Julie

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Charles stares at Julie through the window,

sees the flick of blonde hair framing her face.

He strokes his chin as she points at something in the room.

A friend she is with laughs and waves.

 

Charles needs a plan.

Something to grab her attention.

So with all his focus, he defecates where he is sat.

 

He stares at his waste, picks it up

and with his best aim throws it in Julie’s direction.

 

It splats on the window.

Julie recoils then laughs and laughs with her friend.

 

Charles waves at Julie, his sad eyes asking a question.

 

We should note, at this point, that Charles

is a chimpanzee at Chester Zoo.

 

Julie looks back at Charles, sees heartbreak in his face

then moves on to the elephants of the Asian Forest.

 

Charles wipes away a tear then consoles

himself with a slow ride on the tyre swing.

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<Deleted User> (7212)

Sun 11th Sep 2011 10:31

poor Julie - I bet she went apeshit

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 9th Sep 2011 19:00

Poor thing! Just goes to show - we are all prone to love-attacks!

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Isobel

Fri 9th Sep 2011 16:27

Well I'm most surprised you didn't get him to rap one off John... riding on a tyre swing is quite tame by your standards.

Your story works well as an analogy for unrequited love. The picture of him sat alone at the end is such a sad one though.

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