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Wrong Name

 

My little girl, as she was

Riding a pair of shoulders.

Frozen in a shutter lens wink.

Blink and there gone, time runs on.

A snap that caught a snippet of life.

Wrapped, riding hooded in a red blanket,

Shrouded in mystery

Amidst the snowflakes, each one unique.

Looking back at the lens

All innocence and ambivalence.

I don’t know, should I laugh, smile, shout, eyes open, closed

Looking towards, away, far, I’m cold, what?

I don’t know.

It’s my first time on camera, she might have been thinking.

Smeared fingerprints on the glass

Caress your cheekbones

That are trapped by the ageing frame.

And sometimes

Sometimes I take you out.

Spring the spring and spring you from your prison

And unfold

The other third of the picture.

So I can see your father.

But mostly you remain

My little girl

With the wrong name.

 

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Comments

<Deleted User> (5984)

Sun 31st Aug 2008 14:22

Beautiful Scott. It made me cry. What more is there left to say.

Mel
xx

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Rodney Wood

Fri 29th Aug 2008 16:36

Scott,
written with obvious love and you've tried hard, maybe too hard.
Rodney

<Deleted User> (4281)

Thu 28th Aug 2008 04:18

HI, Scott

Great write you created here I like the picture of your little one riding on your shoulders, great souvenir poem. Thank you for sharing. Loved your write.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Pete Crompton

Wed 27th Aug 2008 21:25

Scott.
Nice poem.Like the idea about the folded up picture.Spring loaded backing to the picture.Nice.
Should have been on the cd, we both have some faded picture poems.

Like Lauretta said in the howcroft, respect, but still hurt by some things

Good Work.I do like this poem.

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