Bodies
My wife and I used to live
By a mountain lake
And sometimes when the sun came up
It was so clear, the water
You’d see two water bodies
Pressed against each other,
And when the wind whipped
They’d just roll into each other,
They’d love each other in the morning.
But then
The sun would rise
Time would pass
And the heat would come,
Leaving only the original
To roll with itself.
I miss my wife.
<Deleted User> (5646)
Tue 9th Sep 2008 19:03
Hello Scott,
Your poem is so very simply written and yet evokes much beauty.
I'm in full agreement with Moira and Val.
Love Janet.x