FOR ROSE
(with regrets)
Rose, it doesn`t need me to say
How warm your eyes are,
How full of the merry-dance flicker and play
Of flame. The light of a bright star`s
Cold compared ( that light`s more near,
Snug from your heart-blaze, cosy and charm and cheer).
These are but truths.
And you`ve got grace girl, your dancing soothes
Tired eyes, as in the music`s slake you move,
Straight as a sea-frond, supple, and slender, and smooth.
Friendly as help your smile was, welcome-wide,
So open love it humbled all my pride.
But I – the cold outsider - stayed outside
……………………………………………..
Yes I…the cold outsider…stayed…outside
Nick Coleman
Mon 31st Oct 2011 17:23
Harry, yes this is very moving,an apple that wanted picking but the hand reaching out to it froze.
And Thanks for comments on Womb. Ditto I am an old fart who really does not want to labour too hard to 'get' a poem (and I dont do sudoku either.)