PERSIAN PUNCH - the death of a great race horse
Persian Punch found a secure place in the affections of the racing public - always trying his
best. And when he collapsed and died in the final stages of a race at Ascot the sorrow was immediate and heart-felt.
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Brave eyes wept at the Ascot course
When he came to the end of his run;
For the going down of that great horse
Was like the going down of the sun.
Brilliantly, he had brought the light
Into so many days,
And now he'd fought his final fight
Before their grief-filled gaze.
But when the sun comes up each dawn
To ease the human heart,
We will recall the heart that was born
And beat in a horse apart.
John Coopey
Mon 31st Oct 2011 21:44
Nice work again, MC. Impressive use of abab rhyming patterns in such short lines. I recognise and envy the skill. The rhythm is also self-evident and persistent despite varaiable line lengths. (The mark of a musician).