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The Itch

The itch itches,

a thousand little mind-witches,

chafing and thirsting,

bursting,

craving,

pacing the paving,

longing to scratch,

to match

inner to outer.

A mouse in the house.

A louse.

A hundred mice,

a thousand lice.

Fickle peace,

tickle ruined,

the goad

to take the road,

tiny, mini, gremlinny nibbling,

quibbling.

The trouble with temptation

is that it's so

tempting.

◄ Pillow Fights

cause & effect ►

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Lynn Dye

Mon 5th Dec 2011 00:18

Love this, Dave, I itch just reading it! :)

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 4th Dec 2011 15:29

Yeh! Watch out the lightning later Mr B!

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:23

I love the

"thousand little mind-witches"

Good one Dave!

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Francine

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 17:08

If in doubt...
The only way to get rid of temptation is to yield to it.
~ Oscar Wilde

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Fri 2nd Dec 2011 13:15



Oh I just make things easy for myself and succumb, seems to me that all the good things are labelled with 'temptation.'

Specially the best choccies :o)

ha gremlinny nibbling!

steve mellor

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 11:54

Go on then Dave, what are you itching for?
This tickled my funny-bone

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