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I LOVE YOU TODAY

Lucky it's me -

So glad it's you,

Enchantment in all of the things that we do,

My feelings are many, my words but a few,

Remember - I love you today.

 

Sometimes it's right -

Sometimes it's wrong,

Sometimes our tune is a now and then song,

But we know our refrain and we know when it's wrong,

Remember - I love you today.

 

Maybe we could -

Maybe we would

Always be tender, it's good that we should,

When love comes so rarely it's misunderstood,

Remember - I love you today.

 

Some days it's joy -

Some days it's pain,

Always the sun coming after the rain,

And always I'll tell you again and again

Remember - I love you today.

 

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Comments

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 4th Dec 2011 08:36

Beautiful poem! Love it.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 4th Dec 2011 00:59

Hey - does J.C. equate with "just cynical"?
Have you no romance in your soul? Read it or sing it - the message is the same.

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John Coopey

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 23:43

You dirty Old Bugger! I hope it worked. It's cheaper than flowers anyway.
Am I mistaken or is it a song in the making rather than a stand alone poem (albeit with a very specific purpose)?
Anyroadup, I enjoyed it.

<Deleted User> (6315)

Sat 3rd Dec 2011 01:27


Read this yesterday and thought I had replied..

Love that second verse especially..and the repetition works well aww I just love this one.. :o)

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