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Hear, Hear, New Year!

Hear, Hear, New Year!

I have a tart card held,

I have an innate weight I dispel –

I hold you close

each year,

the charms held on my arm.

 

Hear, Hear, New Year!

I keep you fixed in fear,

the sight of you draws near –

the spent and want of what could disappear

with each swallowed sphere.

 

Hear, Hear, New Year!

The corner of the day

solvent, and Christian and too much

to seep into the night

easily, the thought reappears –

each last cowardice eats here.

 

Hear, Hear, New Year!

I have

an intimate fright;

a step into the tight

light

march of a ghoulish brigadier

finding height and finding height.

 

Hear, Hear, New Year!

I am already past you –

hurtling into the night.

 

◄ White Widow

The Other ►

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 6th Jan 2012 10:05

Really like this Marianne - it has a great rythm and sound like fighting talk! (And dare I say - Happy New Year?) xx

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 6th Jan 2012 09:59

Thank you for your considered comment Isobel. I, too, am just going with the flow at the moment in terms of what I write and while I feel it is taking a disjointed turn again, I am happy that you are able to find something within it. The feelings you describe, I hope I have in a way.

Happy New Year.
x

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Isobel

Wed 4th Jan 2012 19:03

Yes - I know lots of people who hate New Year. It's a timely reminder that you are getting older, that you maybe haven't achieved all the things you hoped you would last year, and that as you get older,people are disappearing around you. There is nothing sadder than auld ang sine (forgive the spelling)if you have just lost someone.

For me personally, having always hated New Year, the last two have been the best ever. I think it's a question of being where I want to be, with the people I want to be with and having an uncertain future to call my own. Plenty of booze and a good party also helped.

Am I improving Marianne? I'm not trying to interpret - I'm just going with the flow and finding my own reaction to your poem :)

Happy New Year x

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