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The Tudor

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And lo there came in to this world a light,

guiding all those who sought, unto this place,

shining through the bleakness of eternity,

enfolding all who followed with its grace.

 

And many who had travelled here were weary,

from the scourges of the journeys they had made,

bodies badly bruised upon the pathways,

the faith they had in kindred soul betrayed.

 

Yet all that came inside this place were welcome,

and room was made for each and everyone,

the famished fed on fellowship and bounty,

a banquet set for all to feast upon.

 

Here kings could sit with commoners at table,

in knowing no man mattered more or less,

for status had no meaning here, no value,

the cut of cloth, the wallet, nor the dress.

 

And though each traveller spoke a foreign language,

by miracle each voice was understood,

for poetry’s a universal minstrel,

its music one of empathy and love.

 

And every soul that came here was replenished,

those empty but for anger and for hate,

free to vent their sorrow, seek new meaning,

find comfort, hope and solace in this place.

 

And so it was that all were reconciled,

the gift of kinship given to all men,

glasses filled to brim with mirth and merriness,

with Tudor spirit, cleansed and born again!

 

◄ Bonding Over the Argos Catalogue

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 12th Jan 2012 14:17


Nice appreciative proof that slightly archaic (but clear) language can still be used in modern poetry.

SOUNDS LIKE A NICE PLACE.

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Isobel

Thu 12th Jan 2012 14:11

Thanks Laura/Jonboy - yes it is a very different style for me - not one I embrace very often. I wanted to write in a kind of biblical way since I was using the Christmas story - I just couldn't get the flow going though - so it ended up being more classical. It is probably a bit too quaint and old fashioned for many on here. I think it worked well as a contrast to contemporary stuff in the book though.

(I only posted to illustrate how I set about doing Iambic Pentameter.)

Anthony - it would be lovely to see/hear you at the Tudor one day. You will have to make the effort to come up! x

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Laura Taylor

Thu 12th Jan 2012 13:36

Aye, tis a great poem this one, one of my favourites from the crimbo booklet. Very different to a lot of the stuff I read by you Isobel. Love its 'nobleness' if that's a word, and if ever a place/night was worth an homage, it's the Tudor. I bloody love it in there, don't understand why some people seem to see it as argy - I feel soooo comfy in there it's unreal. I feel very uncomfortable in places where everyone is 'behaving' - much prefer shouty camaraderie and people hustling outside for a massive gang smoke :D :D

See ya there later!

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Jon

Thu 12th Jan 2012 13:08

Hi Isobel
First time I've seen this one...couldn't get to Tudor last month.A timely tale,and a well thought out homage to our beloved Tudor. Loved the bit about travellers speaking foreign languages! Amazing how we can decipher the Yorkshire dialect,and other regional strangeness yet still take them to our bosom like brothers or sisters isn't it!Nice one Isobel! x

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 11th Jan 2012 22:44

I'm gonna make it there - someday . . .

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