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JUST DO IT !

He said he loved me

but I don't think he liked me.

Yeh, he sent me flowers

and things and showered

 

me with gifts and meals.

But that didn't make me feel

any depth

but maybe it kept

 

me dangling in hope.

But what a dope

me! You see

my shallow thoughts are for me,

yeh,me.

 

I really don't want deep,

I don't want sleep

in our times of lust,

I don't want trust.

 

I just want to enjoy

the feeling of being a toy.

A mutual feeling,

a mutual stealing

 

of no regrets,

no rules set.

Just get it on.

Yeh, that's it, fun, fun,

then gone, gone !

◄ NO BLUE PETER BADGE FOR A CHEAP COLLAR

FEOTAL DISTRESS ►

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Martin Peacock

Tue 31st Jan 2012 14:59

Don't quite understand where this is going, Mike. One minute you're dangling in hope and the next you're saying you don't want trust. Am I misreading this? I liked the line
'I just want to enjoy
the feeling of being a toy' though: it spoke for the rest of the poem.

<Deleted User> (6315)

Wed 25th Jan 2012 22:17


really like that lead in verse Mike..

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