I saw God today, he said hello, I said OK.
Its funny what some people say.
I said I'm off out with the lads tonight do you want to play,
Sorry he says I've got to pray.
Pray for what I said a mans got to play.
For your souls he says you'll find out why some day.
Cool ... I said.
Aint it funny what people say.
Many thanks for your feedback-I'l pass it on to the big man next time we chat!
Wot Anthony sed - very clever, without looking like it
Man's predicament - the physical and the spiritual at odds as always, with the undertow
of that never-quite-sure feeling about the value we place on things in life. Neatly
put.
This made me stop and think, both about your narrator, and God. You've managed to encompass a whole lot in a very few lines. Clever, thought provoking, incisive - and very good.
Regards,
A.E.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 22nd Jan 2012 18:01
I agree, very interesting. 'You do your thing, I'll do mine - no problem.' The title is a real hook.