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Then

 

Summer never came so quick –

grass smacked, a cucumber air,

promised on a bird call, shot through

the colour of her hair,

a scream of bicycles and their fall.

 

No other before it seemed

had ever felt anything  –

the sirens of the suspension,

rang out in sweet petal tempered rain,

fingers locked in the curling veil,

 

soft, rubbed with a half here sight,

gathering in the folds,

where eye met eye, brave to hold

nothing old to fear. Summer went so close

to ruining any thought of future,

 

stowed away on the bold blue

rushing past their shoulders in the laughter –

over the hill,

their bicycles

and the yell of youth and abandon.

 

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Mon 16th Jan 2012 12:51

ooops! Thankyou for pointing that out to me!

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Laura Taylor

Mon 16th Jan 2012 12:49

'a scream of bicycles' - now that really shouldn't make sense, but it does, somehow. 'syowed' doesn't, however ;D

I really like that first verse, but got a bit lost with the middle two

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 16th Jan 2012 02:06

Ah...youth! When time was a friend who stood
by your side against age and its dreaded infirmities...but whose friendship was only
conditional from ruthless old Mother Nature.
These lines bring that fleeting "gather ye roses while ye may" feeling to life, albeit that some of the expressed imagery finds me scratching.

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