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Stains of Rain

And the rain slides down the glass.
My life is clear in moments of clarity,
and then the memories
are lost
in a haze.
I am drifting once again,
and I cannot feel this road
beneath me.
And it is raining today,
tears falling down
so gently
from heaven to here,
and sometimes,
I feel so much.
And sometimes,
I feel nothing at all,
and I am drifting once again.
I would love to get lost
within sleep,
but sleep has not been
so kind.
And my mind
is a car driving too fast,
and I fear not able to brake.
And my life has found another wall.
Is there anything waiting
on the other side?
I am drifting again,
and as another day
slides into tomorrow,
I watch the rain
fall so quietly
outside my window.

Stains of Rain
by, Melissa R. Mendelson

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 12th Oct 2008 23:23

Hi Melissa

Yet again, I identified with your work, the sadness, the analogy with the rain, and the ups and downs, can you read my mind?

Nice to read a poem from you as always, Jeffx

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Fri 10th Oct 2008 16:27

Dear Melissa

The poem is written with many feeling and emotions from your heart. Well done, quite descriptive with lovely metaphors which make the poem sounds beautiful. We do not have much rain here so it is quite different from you. But most of the time we do have a cold and blue sky. I love the mixture of feelings and the connections with the weather.There are a little melancholy in your words. But the write is wonderful.

PS: Thank you for the comment and your concern. Yes, I had some problem with my Internet and my computer, other then that I am fine.

Kind regards,
Zuzanna

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Thu 9th Oct 2008 01:16

Hi Melissa,
Sometimes i love to watch the rain from my window.
I even imagine the break in the clouds, and you know what?
Invariably within a half hour, there's a break in the clouds.
Sleepless nights can be troublesome though.

God bless, take care.
Love Janet.xx

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