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Lunch Box

A chocolate finger, marshmallow or two

I lifted the lid in dismay

 

A carrot, a plum

Wedge of cheese; the size of my dad’s thumb

 

Hoping for jam sandwiches, on triangle bread

No such luck: Left over stew, potatoes like lead

 

Don’t be ungrateful, some kids don’t get fed

Feeling guilty; after giving the ducks my dinner instead

 

Now I appreciate my mum’s savoury delights

Fewer trips to the dentist, to fight the decay

 

Perhaps my little one’s will have sushi; and hummus with pitta

I just hope they’ll eat it all up; and it doesn’t end up as litter.

 

This poem was inspired by a poem written by Hugo Williams - Scratches.

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 19th Oct 2008 09:47

Hiya Belinda, hope you're well

This is nice and simply put with a strong message of how ungrateful we are as a race, sad but true!

Hope the Zombies didnt eat all your marshmallows! Jeff X

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Belinda Johnston

Mon 13th Oct 2008 12:59

I like that :)) cheers mate :)).

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garside

Sun 12th Oct 2008 16:50

eat eat
till all is done
and tell the story
in the shape of a bun

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