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The Whale's Mouth

 

How do I get inside you?

The things I have lost, I think you have –

swimming around in your belly,

as dark as asphalt,

touching to create a lung in an embrace, a number

safe

as I would have them.

 

Do you have them?

 

My ribs rise and fall;

crowing iron, shipwrecked,

anorexic -

apparent – a vest of razors

with every breath.

To slip the shades of drowning

in,

spot the dull cell

with blood yet –

 

a thought of oxygen

 

behind your smile –

I sink for that;

 

a burst of things lost –

a sudden show of what I am not –

OPEN UP!

 

I shove and the b

ubbles rise from your lips,

dizzy and sweet -

bolting past my eyes like green whiskers.

 

◄ Painting Consciousness

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Comments

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Feb 2012 11:36

Brilliant. a poetry feast. Have you ever 'analysed' "Jonah in the Belly of the Whale"?

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Rachel Bond

Mon 20th Feb 2012 15:24

great poem

love the whale mouth and belly imagery

digging into it its uncomfortable as rooting through the past should be.

xx

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