Its the memories....
M.C. Thanks for that, I agree it did need something extra on that line.
John not to happy with audio,one day maybe.
Hello Val. You should set this to audio.
Food for thought about ageing and its place in our lives. I would make one small change for rhythm and emphasis but this is purely personal - from a songwriter's POV. e.g.
"This is good, but we can't unpack,
We're all heading home...there's no going back".
By the way, I like "but we can't unpack" in this context. Neat!
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Harry O'Neill
Fri 2nd Mar 2012 00:08
Val,
I like the way your single line on it`s own
`His pain and discomfort now deceased`
separates the account of an individuals beloved death from the lesson we should all learn from it.