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Your Space or Mine

The barren whitewashed walls won’t talk

in the absence of graffiti;

no scripture scrawled in paint or chalk,

no importunate entreaty

 

saying  meet me at The Nail Bar

on Saturday at half past two –

we’ll promenade the boulevard

like the gentle people do.

 

I’d write messages on buses

with my fingers in the dust

or the carts collecting rubbish

if those services weren’t cut.

 

All the advertising hoardings

are dismantled from their space.

How can lovers do their courting

without a premise to deface?

 

I grieve our loss of common ground

and the theft of collective art.

Conceptual sex has let us down

and my digits find it hard

 

to keep abreast of current text

and a tongue I can’t decipher,

but I’ll perpetuate affect

and become a Second Lifer.

◄ Vertigo

The Vapours ►

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Ray Miller

Fri 30th Mar 2012 19:32

Thankyou, steve black.Now it's high time I went. It simply ain't worth the effort anymore.

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Ray Miller

Thu 29th Mar 2012 09:24

Thanks, Nick. Second Life is an online game/world where people can play at being who they are not. I'm trying to show, in my clumsy way, how our public space has been abandoned, or stolen, and replaced by the private sphere, cyberspace.

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Thu 29th Mar 2012 07:58

Does 'Second Lifer' mean you've to kill again? You're right we should lament the passing of decent - indecent - graffiti (hope you've speeled that correctly 'cos I copied yours) I must infer from the 'courting couple's loss of premise' that there is no conclusion! Goodly stuff, ta muchly, Nick.

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