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Promises, Promises

Save your energy for another day

add your tears to another year.

 

At the edge of the dance floor

watching, waiting

hoping to catch

 

the dream that they sold in little paper bags.

 

Swirled into existence

a promise and kiss

a murmur of sadness

perhaps fading into bliss.

 

Stop still, the room vibrates

sweat dries, lights go up.

 

Morning has come

Go home

This isn't it.

◄ Save your energy

Mamihlapinatapai ►

Comments

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kayberley

Tue 1st May 2012 07:05

Thanks Win, Have edited, Shall aim to post something a bit more cheery next time.x

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winston plowes

Mon 30th Apr 2012 22:53

A big fan of the simple words you have posted for us here. Life is no fairytale unfortunately. Win X

Typo in ln 2 ad - and? but it got me to thinking 'Add your tears TO another year'

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kayberley

Mon 30th Apr 2012 21:55

Thanks for the comments guys:)

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Glyn Pope

Tue 17th Apr 2012 20:24

Yes, I liked this. Not terribly clever, nor did you want it to be. Simply the emotion expressed.

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Sat 14th Apr 2012 20:55

Loved it.

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