Analysing Trust
Catch the spinning prisms of my mind
So that away on a wing we can go to find,
The truth that few may know or admit
That it is better to be hurt by honesty than deceit.
For of all the sounds we make
And of all the words we speak,
Or of all the notes we cue
Few come tomorrow, will still ring true.
Every promise you receive
Every emotion you perceive,
Examine them closely through eyes of old
Counterfeit mostly, bought entirely as sold.
Real trust hurts, trusting is pressure
You put a lot in, hope for a lot back,
If you lose your nerve you will fail for sure
So you try to avoid the caring knack.
You didn’t mean to fall in love mould
All you wanted in the whole wide world,
Was just to have some fun
But now the risk of cost has come.
But future’s focus is still remote and grey
We must trust today for the sake of today,
For there will always be a cloud in sight
Happiness by nature being but a fleeting flight.
Roy Chetham
Sat 21st Apr 2012 17:57
Thanks Nick for the feedback.
Yes, the parts you highlight as problematic I have struggled with and changed before.
I am still not happy with them and will consider your suggestions.