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UNCTION

UNCTION

 

You live your life, you take the blows,
Its deepest wound the blackened bruise
Where sometime roads would trail desire,
And lead down ways we would not choose.

 

God knows I’ve sought the sheltered glade,
Where summer breezes always blow,
But oft I walked the rock strewn path,
And found that place we should not go.

 

I find with age some restful calm,
The bruises fade the scars bleach white,
The road seems straighter, silken smooth,
With once great burdens feather light.

 

I feel the swell of gentle seas,
A barque that brings my soul to rest,
One love to draw my compass home,
One burning passion bold and blessed.

 

Where love is truth and love is fine
Who could deny what truth to bring,
A melody carved hard on stone,
That sets those very stones to sing.

 

For now with love I’m compassed round,
My sea is deep my soul is clean,
There stands no cloud to hide my view,
And naught but death could come between.

 

I feel the very hand of god,
That restful touch that bids me bide,
That sweet caress, enfolding, calm,
That seeks the end to all my pride.

 

God knows I sought the sun kissed way,
But took the knocks and felt the blade,
I walked alone the rock strewn path,
But now I have my sheltered glade.

 

And in this peace I’m bought and blessed,
With love life’s precious haven now,
Anointed for the rest of time,
The oil of grace upon my brow. 

 

 

◄ CARRION SPRING

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 30th Apr 2012 15:43

We are taken on a journey, which, once completed, makes us glad we went. Commitment and craft in equal measure, with a fine use of phrase that lingers in the mind.

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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Sun 29th Apr 2012 20:43

My sea is deep my soul is clean. Mmm, loved this one (not just this line).

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John Coopey

Sun 29th Apr 2012 20:32

"sets those very stones to sing". That does it for me, Ian.
Every bit as magical as the first man (surely a son of the gods) who took rock and fired it until an altogeher new substance, metal, bled from it.

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jane wilcock

Sun 29th Apr 2012 18:08

Hi Ian, a lovely poem for a sunday evening, the rain has petered out and the sky lightened, reminds me of Blake.

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