Mature Student
He was a hooligan back in the 70s,
a real hard bastard, a member of the
Monte Carlo crew. Middle-age had
softened him, not just physically, but
spiritually as well. He swapped the
terraces for the suburbs, got himself
a wife and fathered three pretty girls.
Now, he works with children who have
learning difficulties, and harbours
‘literary ambitions’ in his spare time. In
the lecture, he waits patiently while the
rest of the students jabber and flap in
the front of the group. He looks placid,
but there’s a glint in his eye, a cold blue
flicker that suggests that even now, if
anyone tries taking the piss, he’ll hammer
them flat like a panel. It’s more like a
therapy session than a lesson this, he says
when it’s his turn to speak. For various
reasons, no-one disagrees with him.
Yvonne Brunton
Tue 1st May 2012 23:16
I bet this sounds fantastic as a performance piece. I love it but cannot for the life of me see why it is presented in verse format. It reads just as well, with its good punctuation, as a piece of good prose because with so much enjambement the verse structure rather fades into the background.
Mine you, presenting it this way got my attention and I read it! xx