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Mature Student

 

He was a hooligan back in the 70s,

a real hard bastard, a member of the

Monte Carlo crew. Middle-age had

softened him, not just physically, but

 

spiritually as well. He swapped the

terraces for the suburbs, got himself

a wife and fathered three pretty girls.

Now, he works with children who have

 

learning difficulties, and harbours

‘literary ambitions’ in his spare time. In

the lecture, he waits patiently while the

rest of the students  jabber and flap in

 

the front of the group. He looks placid,

but there’s a glint in his eye, a cold blue

flicker that suggests that even now, if

anyone tries taking the piss, he’ll hammer

 

them flat like a panel. It’s more like a

therapy session than a lesson this, he says

when it’s his turn to speak. For various

reasons, no-one disagrees with him.

  

 

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Yvonne Brunton

Tue 1st May 2012 23:16

I bet this sounds fantastic as a performance piece. I love it but cannot for the life of me see why it is presented in verse format. It reads just as well, with its good punctuation, as a piece of good prose because with so much enjambement the verse structure rather fades into the background.
Mine you, presenting it this way got my attention and I read it! xx

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